Why did my character say that?
How often in creative writing workshops have you heard that it is important to make your characters come alive? Like most authors I’ve struggled with that over the years but let me tell you, when it happens it’s both exhilarating and problematic.
I’ve plotted every scene of my current novel in sufficient detail for me to work on the first draft, which I’ve been doing now for a couple of months. There are quite a few characters in addition to the protagonist and antagonist, some I’m happy with, some I’m not. The latter need more work but the former feel well-rounded and I can see them. The problem starts when they’re so well drawn that they say things that aren’t in the plot but seem entirely appropriate for them to say at the time and in the place they find themselves. The others then need to react to the new situation and the story takes a twist I wasn’t expecting.
I could, of course, just go back and make the character say what I wanted them to say, bully them into submission if you like, but that would then be me talking, not the character. It would be false and, after all, I’ve wanted my characters to jump off the page so shouldn’t complain when they do.
How have I drawn them in this way? I don’t know. I’m a writer not a tutor and there are many good resources out there (like the excellent ones at ProWriting Aid) which explain better than I could how to strive for this. All I know is that the two people in this novel who seem to be speaking out of turn the most are ones where I drafted character sketches in the early planning. They didn’t become the ones I’d sketched, not entirely, but something in the process must have made them more real to me – allowed them (and me) to break free of two dimensions.
It’s exciting when this happens, even if it does mean parts of the plan need to be screwed up and re-written. It’s more than worth it in the end.